I just did an update on “the city of love.”
The parts that are updated are in blue. I was trying to do the whole search by date thing but that damn Ambrose Bierce book is just totally pushing me and I am changing big things, small things and then my head felt like it might explode.
I am having to not only look at it thematically and structurally but now every single word has to be carefully thought through.
But it has led to such changes as heat going from “glaring off the sand” to “flowing from the sand” and that makes me happy (if not slightly neurotic).
You can read it at here or access the City of Love page on your cellphone at m.loveandwords.mobi.
And thank you all for your comments so far, it is phenomenally helpful.
I do wish though that this was all I had to do with my life.