enough of that

I just did an update on “the city of love.”

The parts that are updated are in blue. I was trying to do the whole search by date thing but that damn Ambrose Bierce book is just totally pushing me and I am changing big things, small things and then my head felt like it might explode.

I am having to not only look at it thematically and structurally but now every single word has to be carefully thought through.

But it has led to such changes as heat going from “glaring off the sand” to “flowing from the sand” and that makes me happy (if not slightly neurotic).

You can read it at here or access the City of Love page on your cellphone at m.loveandwords.mobi.

And thank you all for your comments so far, it is phenomenally helpful.

I do wish though that this was all I had to do with my life.

🙂

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"There are few artists that can do what Cassandra Tribe does. Whether with her poetry, her videos or her blog, Cassandra examines the truths that most of us can never come close to realizing and shows it for what it is, both beautiful and frightening at the same time. She exposes our inner-most workings like the cross-section of a powerful but flawed machine, our gears and springs, nuts and bolts removed and laid out before us. She is a true artist. Her new video, Requiem for a God, is the latest example of Cassandra's willingness to tear open and examine the very things that make us human. Shooting the film entirely by herself, she also eliminates all the little excuses we come up with to keep us from ourselves and our truth. You see, even when she's not trying to be, Cassandra Tribe is a beacon of truth and humanity in this darkest of worlds." (Michael E. Quigg, The Culture Network, June 2009)
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